What little breath lingered
Now gone
What little light peering through
Vanquished by shadow
All it wanted
To live
To feel
No more
Surrounded by earth
In cold and darkness
Suddenly silenced
Cruelly and unwillingly abducted
The little heart pounding
Then crying in anguish
The little heart fading
Then overcome by stillness
Buried in the sand
The first snow covers the grave
Cold winters night
The small heart awakens
The bitter wind blows
Winding up a tiny music box
The child sings from beneath
The haunting moon in full splendor
It hears the cries in the night
And no angel climbs down
Only the rain cries down on the grave…
It's sad in a sort of pitiful way.
Really good work, sorry my comment sucks i'm tired.
Izy
fine with your poem then
anyway... hmm... i like the last line too... rain.. cry... sympathy for the forgotten.. blah...
uhm... i like the abstract and abruptness of it... not your usual style (or that i've seen) but it's nice
yeah.. as far as the picture goes... tho... i think you could have placed the text in a nicer place
good job mb... good job.